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Old 12-10-06, 05:21 PM   #21
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
like everyone said, fresh but wording was kinda forced

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Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
Jimmy Cricket idea was a good idea for a feed, but wording is off
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
nah, too stretched and not really a great nameplay

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Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
simple, not much really to this, but it was okay

Tha Don, work on making ya lines not as stretched and read better.

Vote - Tony Brown
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