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I don't lose
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IP:
you sound a lil too up on the beat.....like tense i think it is....it would be alot better with a more laid back flow...the hook needs to be mixed again....like you didnt do good with the hook, the dub is too loud takes away from the flow....some things could be upped on production here. n the way you approached the song, but the lyics n flow was straight.....rtf on "fly away"
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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