ya vocals need to be upped a bizzy.....damn man in you spit your almost there, you do it in some lines n then others you just miss.....you need to feel it a lil more, or make us feel that you feel it.....nice concept tho....like how you did the talking all to one side...good use of panning....makes it stick out more.....good shit but again almost there almost.....rtf on fly away the same beat that u was on a long time ago hahah.....

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