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I don't lose
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hahah the singing is EXACTLY like a hook on one of RZA's joints from his new cd...diff words tho....good shit tho....the twisted needs to be emphisized much moreeeeeeeeee......you started your verse with a few fumbles but got the flow straight in it....your verses need to be upped .5dbs i woulda liked more abuot bein twisted instead of boasted shit in the third so i could relate a bit more....good shit tho, deff chill.....fix the hook up n its a real tight song.....rtf on fly away please
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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