cool concept...

the beat fits the concept well...but im just not feelin it...

on the first verse...there are a couple spots where i feel like you rushed the flow a lil...i realize you were going for the slowing down, then speeding up deal in a few spots...but it kinda sounded unnatural.......2nd verse was a lot better to me as far as flow wise........lyrically its the same as what you usually bring to the table...pretty good..but not mind blowing...def. not bad though dont get me wrong on that...

quality was ok...kinda sounded like you were speaking through the phone a bit on your verses..u add that EQ in a bit?.....that may have been what you were going for considering you were "on stage"....sounded more like a live performance....overall not bad...keep it up

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