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Nice. Looking at the first few lines I thought this would be a below average piece. But I was pulled in as I read on because I felt like I could relate to the situation. Throw in some great emotion with what seemed to be a pretty good gift at story telling and you have yourself a nice piece. I liked it man, change ur font tho. Shits gay. haha, pz.
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