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Old 12-11-06, 09:24 PM   #5
Sir Smash'Alot
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Waiting for good lines from stanz, we try be patient
but he using so many ....'s we get tired of waiting!!
Even with stretched bars, no hits, all small songs
Leave him like his bar structre, ya, stanzas all wrong
Time to adjust this geeks attitude like my tv
Cause your focus distorted if you think you seein me
Hes hot? 8-11 and the ranks say hes on top?
But his text drops resembles his audio league, a flop
Your from where no one raps good, imma stop south
We have talent shows in school, but you musta dropped out
Your audios the worst, heres a hint, get the right swagga
Perfect line lengths, but there still isnt a tight stanza
Its sad being a geek and such, i mean hes a lonely kid
Id take shots at this dudes crew, but its only him
Ya rhyme capabilities, quite small, all you sayin is midgits
You got wrestling raps, cause all you say is gimmicks
You got a nyquil flow, fuck your structure, learn to sh
Im a die hard eminem fan, but when I heard stan-zzzz

lol done on monday, thats some shit
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