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not feelin the beat at all sounds like church music.......flow sounds a lil choppy but i think it culd be smoothed out....delivery is not there for me....oops i jus heard the flow slip....hook really sounds like church music........voice is ight....yeah i think u shoulda changed the flow on the second verse.....but yea overall i think this wulda sounded better on a diff. beat....stay up do you
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