returning the feed dude..sorry it took so long...u know im good for it though...

hmm vocals could be mixed down to the beat a lil better...you add reverb?..if not maybe you should try adding some and turning the vocals down just a SMALL bit...

yea your flow is DEFINITELY improving..every track u get to where your sounding more and more natural..this is your best track flow wise that ive listened to...like ive always told u...give it time and itll come...and well..its coming......

lyrically coo as well...2nd dude...flow is pretty coo...he speeds up a couple spots to catch up to the beat...but nothing TOO big..could be fixed though.....voice is pretty nice as well.....

but for real man..honestly...i think its time you save money and up the equipment..your getting to where your flow is developing and what not...delivery is coming along better....its time for the next step in making a good song..and thats quality.....invest foo....

overall it wasnt a song that i would download and bump on the regular...but definitely a song i can respect from seeing your progress...like i tell u every song...keep the shit up...it takes time...and your getting there

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