listening...like i told past tense..im using this beat for my next cd i do believe......

past...delivery is nice..BUT..one thing i think you coulda done with this beat...and with the way your verse was written...flow and all....is maybe you shoulda made your voice a bit softer and rapped it with more of a melody..not so much singing..but you know..the singing/rapping thing...i think that would sound dope with this beat...then if u have someone straight rappin on the 2nd verse..it would be a nice mix...but either way..your verse was nice man..i can def. relate to it for real...only part lyrically i can complain about is when u say..."if u think that i suck"...i think u prolly just worded that part a lil different...thats is all my friend...

LE..lmao man..i gotta admit..i love your opening lines...the ocean wouldnt hold every sin i put in it...thats dope man....lyrically shit is illin dude for real...your dubs arent lined up real well...def. check up on that...it sounds kinda weird when you say your dubs like a tenth of a second before u say the words in your verse...flow was coo..could be somewhat smoother..but for the most part..u did it pretty nice..


overall dope tracks fellas....hopefully my feed helped a lil bit in improvement...1

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