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beat is dope, but like Past said i'm not 100% positive it fits your topic quite right... your flow is on point as usual and presence is there... i would consider changing how you come in though, i see what you're saying, it just seems to kinda jump in.
thats pretty much it, it sounds pretty professional, but i can see it improving two-fold with a re-make...
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