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Old 12-13-06, 07:05 PM   #5
Jay Rose
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damn man....your shit like 80 percent of it would be soooo much better if you fix up your dubs....all are always like milliseconds off.....takes so much away from your deep lyrics....did you spit these verses at different times voice sounds signifantly lower the second verse...i unno....you have this rushed sence to your verses sometimes that on a beat like shit should have been calmed down, the more you relax the better you are....this was a pretty good song and you seem to be gettin better with each song you put out....good shit, we gotta get another collab in soon
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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