fist time ive listened to you.....

good vocal inflections on the hook...in the verse specially at the begning you sound lost in slowin your flow down...its like you are halfway there, its like you have it in your head but you cant get the flow down right, im following it but it drops off a bit a lil bit thru the verse...again i liked the hook....yup.....work on your dubs, they are about ONE millisecond late, and bout .3db's too high....same thing with the flow, it just sounds you are a lil uncomfortable on slowin your flow down.....

production wise i like most of it, the hook effects made it stand out to the verses...maybe up the volume a tad in the verses n honestly i cant hear the pain in your voice, it sounds like you wrote it and rapped it, doesnt seem to me you feel it....at least not while your rapping it.....that will come with comfort tho...stay up

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