ight i like this, was thinkin about hoppin on, but le was quick to grab it......
past tense - im worried dude, you dont sound better.....you sound good but i had hoped you woulda elevated a bit more.....you seem to have a problem sticking to rhyme scheme flow, you switch it up alot which is good but hard to follow sometiems a more smooth approach woulda been nice with this beat....but still really good, just some stuff to inspire you to get better

le - your lyrics are good, your voice is gettin there, you seem like you have alot of siliva to deal with, not a slur but close....your verse is more smooth but goes by quick nothing really stuck out to me except the first line....still a good verse, production wise think your dubs are a lil loud but thats just me otherwise good track both of you and keep em comin

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