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Old 12-13-06, 08:01 PM   #7
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Beat's alright.....actually, I kinda like it. The sample at the beginning could get annoying, but I kinda liked it too.

PTs Flow was pretty nice for the mood of the song. Only thing I didn't like is how you sometimes try to rhyme words that almost rhyme.....like when you tried with off/god. You also get a little too comfortable with your flow. It's almost like you are used to how you're spitting so you won't stray from it. Kinda like your lines are all exactly the same, just different words. I don't know how to explain it any better....lol.


LE needed to brush up on the flow a little. Just seemed like he was cramming too many words into a line. Presence was nice though. You definitely sounded a lot more comfortable than the last time I heard you.


Not a bad track overall.....just a couple of areas to polish up a bit


Ohh yea......how hard is it to fade the beat out when the song is about to end? That's like a huge fuckin pet peeve of mine.......lol
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