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K Illa

Aye Man I dont know if you had permission to edit your verse....But....anyway on the basis of the edited verse that was left it was aii nothing specail nothinreally stood out yo ddint hav any good concepts they were mostly played out stuff jus flipped and reworded a little better but still I dont think that that whole lot of somethin came up to nothing but it came up to a little somethin But work on that

Shiest

Man Your verse wasnt anythin more than specail neither but overall you had a nice begining and thats whats really needed to have someone read the rest of your verse lol ...l...But overall you had some nice originality in the begining but still nothing special

My v/ Shiest

Sorry K Illa Much Luck in the future

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