not really good... u need to work on ur structure and flow more... lotta stuff there is basic...only real line i liked was but i'll still snap ya wrist if u pick up the phone ,
guess you can call this the ghetto version of home alone. but besides that its kinda lame..... not many peeps would get the line being that homealone is an old movie and it was also crappy......

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