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Old 12-15-06, 08:16 AM   #13
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Voted For: Capo~Status

i aint voted on a text battle in a LONNGGG minute...but here we go

Tha_Don_of_Mics
Capone screamin "fuck the world", cuz you know he's thuggin
Oddly enough, his dick's in ant wholes, cuz we know he's buggin*
^ meh at this...slightly feelin the ant holes/buggin bit but not overly much

Only time ya "lock'd down" is when ya shuttin it before recesse-kid
N i'm busting ya chops harder then demolition crews tearing threw Porky Pig
^ 2nd line self glory where's the diss...oh the first line...shoulda switched them round would of been more effective but still not a decent 2 lines none the less

N if ya rap career never follows threw for ya no worries-i wont taunt ya
Cuz, for a runt like you, work is always open at willy wonka
^ lame closer man shoulda hit him wit a personal/punch connection type 2 lines here...that lacked big time

Overall
Really weren't feelin it man to be honest with ya...punches lacked and where there should've been a punch in the middle 2 lines...you threw a self glory line...pretty weak overall man[/b]

Capo~Status
My verses could drop you~With aliases I drop Gs
Your last place in 1-2~And First up'n'Herb-Hop Teams
^ 1st line was poo...self glory ugh...2nd line carried a personal and a slight diss, better start

Fuck-out of here cock-boi~TO you I reach Prominence
It's kinda sad how this fag...
...Has to quote praises to boost up his coinfidence
^ not feelin the 3 line setup...but the rhyme was good and the personal was effective...best bars out the whole battle imo

Tha_don_of_dics is shit'n'please, You winnin's a Blessin'
For I'll don this whore of Mic's...Whose the pimp'n' Question?
^ Weak closer but slight name play...but still a weak 2 lines though

Overall
Now this wasn't much better either to be honest but his middle bit alone won it for me...that was the ONLY reasonable diss throughout the WHOLE battle...not an enjoyable verse...but still was SLIGHTLY better...and i'm being modest when i say slight...

V/Capo~Status...don't have anything open battle wise but if you guys could hit up "Crazy Lager" in the song forum i'd appreciate that
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