Damn TEF it seems like a re-occuring problem with you. Got these good concepts than you stumble on the wording and makes a potentially good punch not hit.

Ya’ll can’t convince me he’s not a faggot tryna act grown and savy
Palmin so many black balls, you’d think his bedroom were a Bowling alley

That was the only line i could quote... but the funny bone line could have been better... the comma line could have been way better too, i seen that and was like 'this should be dope'.

Comedian wasn't much better but I don't think he was aiming for a dope verse.

The break even was alright and the periods line was pretty funny.

Vote - Comedian

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