Listening....
I'm digging the beat man. I thought your hook at the beginning had the layers off a bit. You had some flat lines in the hook too, but I can't sing either.....lol. I don't really like your swag too much....I think it's the way you pronounce words, but the delivery of the song is pretty nice. The part where the beat went silent sounded off somewhat. Lyrics weren't bad. Overall, it was a pretty good track.....just not my kind of thing.