ok another eminem remix...hmmmmmmmmm not use to you talking about something in ya song but I agree wit engyma I didn't like ya swag well really ya delivery/demeanor...its was too focused on anger an stressing words...u shoulda went with a sumber depressed demeanor...it woulda worked better wit beat...flow was too percussionary....a off snare slightly faster flow woulda done so much better....also u was too focused on mimicing eminem instead of making it your song, u made it your version of his....lyrically I liked it, it wasn't perfect an was kinda corny lol but its def a different focus for you....hook again u mimiced em..it woulda been so much better if u came wit ya own melody...u delivery it too flat as well....u really needed to stress the words more but it was mixed pretty tight. overall song was a 7/10 for me it was good becuz it was different but it coulda been executed so much better but keep experimenting an showing ya full artistic range.....1

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