wow ...this is my first time in here and this is the first piece i read, again wow

well wtf, i think your emotion was most definatly felt, and the flow was exceptional
the topic was heartfelt and i felt like you utilized a relevant topic that every
writer could sympathize with, so that =d, your vocab seemed to be appropriate
for the subject and you did a good job of getting your point across, cool, i didnt
see anything that bothered me about this, and good luck to you on the mod spot

...peace...