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Old 12-20-06, 07:15 PM   #6
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"The Original King".. nah, this burger mascots a queen,
And I'll whopper ass more than the frying machine.
I thought this bar wasn't all that great. The concept was a nice idea, but I think the wording was too simple for it to have any real affect. If the wording was better it would've been a killer punch.
You know I work at a mill, your fake punches ain't hard..
Only reason you got to this point..
.................................is 'cause I wrote half your bars.
This was a nice bar, a decent feed to. But the concept is actually pretty played even though it is a personal. So many people have dropped bars about ghosting for other dudes and it gets to a point where it isn't as amusing as it first was.

VS.

^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
Lol, this was a decent feed also. But, the same thing applies to this I think. Feeding off a bar and flipping it to say a dude worked at some shitty place is getting played. Although, I don't actually think it is as played as the ghosting personal, but still... it could've been better.
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Lol @ this.. I thought this was pretty clever. The Red Bull nameplays are played to fuck, but the Adam Johnston nameplays still have a little freshness left in them. This was a decent nameplay, a nice punch to... and no need for the explanations, at least for me. That dude sucks ass.

Overall, I thought this battle could've been better. Both had a played punch and both had one not so played. Although I felt that Bull's was more played than Spektikul and his none played punch was just poorly worded making it come across too simple. Spektikul had a pretty cool nameplay on Bull's real name and that is why I think he won this battle.

VOTE: Spektikul
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