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Old 12-21-06, 05:51 PM   #12
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Let me say one thing...

One of the major mistakes newer heads make is playing off of a concept more than dissing their opponent. For example, in the beat to death line some kid posted in here:

.,And even HE knew it, thinking I’m fake and can’t Spit Ether?
Mayhem’ll get “Beat to death” Like he lost a foot race to the Grim Reaper

Whoever wrote this was focusing too much on how to use the phrase "beat to death" PERIOD -- and not nearly enough on how to use the phrase to diss his opponent. Basically, he tried to "validate" the phrase with the second part of the punch "like he lost a foot race to the grim reaper", which resulted in the diss being almost nonexistant.
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