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Old 12-22-06, 04:40 AM   #11
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But I'm not even caring to ace, just get the win dude & wreck this
You can have all day to post, but I'm only gonna give you a second
I'm your guide for the day. Battlings hard and puns are tricky...
DTH made a thread that suits you.. its called "elevation" and its under stickies
acting dope. but a quick win is what you won't cop with that gimmick
fuck 14 lines, pussy, we both know a couple of shots is your limit

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Let’s see ..you retired ..came back to RB ..N’ you were rusty as fuck
Because Feeble had a great fall ..to bad im bout to fuck his winter up



This wasn't a bad battle, i was interested to see how Feebs was droppin lately. I think he's so subtle with some of his wordings that alot of people aren't seein the lines as that nice. All three of the lines i quoted were good lines, neitehr was dope, but they were good lines. The elevation thread line was nice, also a subtle swagger and sarcasm to it. Closer was cool, i like how you connected the drug references with little to point out that's what you were talking about. Wyte, you obviously didn't drop a bad verse, but you do have some room to improve i think, or like you said, you just didn't have alot of ideas for this week which happens to us all. Regardless, the winter/fall line was a solid start then you began to tail off from there. Not a bad battle.


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