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Old 12-22-06, 08:17 PM   #12
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Lets brainstorm a second, your bitch wanted to pick my brains
but opinions are like assholes n I squashed ever idea ya girl threw my way
no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death

vs.


You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.

Overall/-This was a good battle,Roger Glocks had sum nice lines that were connecting well..but alot others that failed with shotty wording..but still were decent lines just not quote worthy..an JH came nice too an consistant too..I really wanted to not uote sum lines but they either made me say damn or laugh..quite witty,Ive seen sum concepts before but not done like he did them..so pretty fresh..good read.
props to both

V/-John Hens
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