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Old 12-22-06, 10:11 PM   #13
Infamouz
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That's a keyword fellas, and Glocks needs another plan.
He isn't praying..
.. but he IS on his knees with his mouth open thankin another man.
Lolz.. Cool
You've won 9 straight, but ain't makin any clout.
I haven't seen a streak that easy..
.. since your mom and sister ran naked through my house.
Meh.. Decent but wording was off.
^^I won't be a hypocrite but listen kid, you should pipe down.
I'd give ya shit for beating no-names.. if that wasn't what i'm doing right now
Lolz..
I don't know if your gay, but in this case, look at this shit.
I'll win, and this'll be a G-loss that'll mimic the shit you put on ya lips..
Lolz.. Creative
You claim you AIN'T a rider, but you got a vain disorder.
Cuz you've been harassin my dick for so long it's filing a restrainin' order.
Ok..
As far as wording goes, face it bitch, you suck with it.
Shit's scrambled so much.. Vince Young and Vick are hittin you up for tips.
Meh..
Takin ya down for the 10 count with out of the world rhymes.
Now ya seein' flashing numbers..
... like my answering machine after i gave ya girl mine.
Lolz..
I used to hype you right, i remember sayin this guy was tight.
I hate to go back on my words.. but u should do it after every single line u write.
Ok..
See, killin you and hidin the body really isn't nothin to me.
Search parties'll get a christmas gift when they find you wrapped up under a tree.
Re-wording would have made it better
It's a loss for ya buddy, i don't mean to make ya world end.
But if you want another belt.. i left a couple of em' strapped to ya girls bed.
Lolz.. Nice

Vs.

keep lyin ur ass off, you feel Glocks and u know im one of the best
cuz he's gonna beat Gun!....the game where u fight indians in the old west
Meh.. ok
Lets brainstorm a second, your bitch wanted to pick my brains
but opinions are like assholes n I squashed ever idea ya girl threw my way
Ok..
your gonna be freakin pissed u blew this battle, it's a mark on ur career
it's like we got visited by a Head coch in this battle...John Madden here
Nah..
no lie! personally he dates young ass bitches, I never meet her
but if ur comparing our lines. its like his taste for girls, ''Minor better''
Wprding was off.
Me and ya mom had good times in the past, shit was fate
n John Hensley taught me alot but atleast im learning from my mistakes
Ok..
Mercules beat you! im 4-0 against him, your not a test
its like the toilets in a public place. so dont tell me this John is fresh
Ok..
after this verse, you should re try your words
cuz the last time u delivered dopeness.... he was my doctor for my birth
No..
your a fucking idiot. your a homo and I exposed u in this battle
ppl say my wording sucks dick but John cant find MY WORDING in Seattle
Meh..
you recycle ALOT old lines buddy, I know he's floored
his lines are like Karoake, saying old shit and makin em worse then b4
No..
3:00 pm is when I pulled out the gun and shoot him in the chest
So, John 3:16 isn't the bibble passage, its around the time of his death
Meh.. Ok..

Ok cool battle here I have to say John came off fresh from the start & kept it going. Good shit Hensley. Glocks never saw your shit before but that was a pretty good verse here. John came off with alot more wittier concept's though & executed them nicely. Glocks you had some punche's that needed re-wording which was what threw you off. you also have to keep up with the consistency. So..

V - John Hensley
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