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Old 12-24-06, 11:16 AM   #3
Enygma
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Word.....dude, you would really benefit from some shit talking or something in the beginning of the track. I don't think that this slow flow suits your delivery well. Lyrics were nice. Hook was pretty tight. Second verse's delivery seemed a little better than the first until about halfway through the verse, then you picked it up a little at the end. Hook is crack though man.......wtf? Why the hell do you always do the 2 verse song? Finish the shit off man.....lol.
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