The beat:Nice beat,I heard papoose use this..but whocares,still nice beat.
Vocals:I like ur swagger on this,try tone'n ur vocals down a bit(wee bit)
Lyrics:send u out the game like a ref.(i liked that)the rest is cool,I enjoy'd the rest...I know alot of folks wont dig what ur doin,bt me personally can see where u takin it..just keep it movin.

props young nigga.