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Old 12-24-06, 10:50 PM   #8
King Solo
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They Way I Ended your Run People Thought My style Was Msytic
I Would Throw a Punch at you...But I Dont like to pick on The Artistic

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Fuck it I'm here to own Stan, seriously get some fucking respect son
Your battles has our hopes up, that you'll drop better in the next one
Your not dope at all son you text battling is way over blown, s'not your throne
Have you living the celeb life & watch fist Rick 'Oshay off your fuckin dome
I know it's that time of the season, so in this league shit happens
Rapping is a gift, but all this has been doing is fucking gift wrapping


Yeah, this battle was pretty one-sided. I think you may need a break Stanza because your drops are getting worse each week. This verse you put down was not that good at all. That one bar I quoted because it was a nice concept but you worded it horridly. Take a look in the elevation thread and get some tips or something to help you get a decent style going and get help with your wording. Artistik dropped pretty good and had those 3 bars that I thought were funny. His verse seems more like a keystyle because I've seen him drop better. Still though, I got a decent laugh out of the hopes up line and the gift wrapping line.

V/ - Artistik
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