stanza

Ill Take this Win With Ease Watch They king Me Like We playin Checkers
and When It comes to pass watch Your Eyes Resemble your record
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vitticus

Fuck it I'm here to own Stan, seriously get some fucking respect son
Your battles has our hopes up, that you'll drop better in the next one
You might champ this league son, fuck no! I dare to dream of the night
Please excuse? Your not sick
You still manage to have the most get better cards I've ever seen in my life
Take the L your vapor now put that pen and paper down, I'll thunder the spars
We all smell
& deny his verses the way everyone puts nose under everyone of his bars


stan

the quote wasthe only line i thought was ight, pretty decent concept, though
it was the visual that had more impact, cos i felt it coulda been worded a lil diff
and im going to have to agree with the others on the elevation side of things,
should check some other styles of peeps you know who are respected, stay up

Vitticus just by the quotables alone you got this, some creative shit, the cards
thing coulda been worded a lil diff , but still descent, and the nose w/play had
humour , while your opener was just a solid punch just a better verse allround
to me, not much more i can say

VOTE//Vitticus