im feelin this alot......i mean man.....the shyt came together in the end it reminded me of three sides to a story by joe budden.........im mean the flow is stretched to all hell.....and i had to read it again cuz lookin at the structure and some of the minor mistakes i couldnt grasp what the connection was.....

this was deep.......the 2nd verse seemed dramatic.....and the 3rd started off great with the unraveling.....but i think killin the coroner was a lil bit tooooo harsh in my opinion.......
*shrugs* good shyt