listening now

the statics kinda high in the beginning

the quality seems like it might be a little iffy

multies were good....you gotta nice laid back underground style...i think that you should add a little more emotion on that first verse......the lyrics had good substance...just a lil more emotion and change up and it would be better

hook same thing..would be better if you added more emotion

second
better emotion.......lyrics are cool......i just dont like the lispy sound on the voice here and there...but its all good.......flow was decent........this aint to shabby either just more emotion and it'd be way better

hook again more emotion and it'd be better


3rd verse seems like the dude has more emotion........lyrics again had good substance.....but with more delivery on that it'd be way sicker...good shit though.........



overall decent song..i think ya'll should re-record it and add a lil more delivery and emotion and it'd be agood album track

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