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Old 12-27-06, 10:16 PM   #12
Te Ora
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I read Your Old Verse and I Must Admit its Like Nothing ive seen Lately
So I Went Back and read Some Old Verses that Strobe did.....In 83

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Your not dope at all son you text battling is way over blown, s'not your throne
Have you living the celeb life & watch fist Rick 'Oshay off your fuckin dome
You might champ this league son, fuck no! I dare to dream of the night
Please excuse? Your not sick
You still manage to have the most get better cards I've ever seen in my life


i've got vit taking this pretty easy. outside of the ones i quoted he was much more consistent. i was close to quoting the "get our hopes up" punch, with different wording i probably would've. the "get better cards" was stretched as hell. would've been better with re-wording, but as is it was still pretty cool. but yea, stanza had too many lame artistick nameplays.


v/ vitticus.
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