Skadoosh!
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IP:
ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
This was decent, although without certain proof that I ghosted for him it doesn't come across as hard as it could be. It is more speculation than effective personal punch power.
.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
This wasn't as good as it could've been. The wording wasn't all that great and you basically focused on the same concept as the first bar, speculating on me ghosting for Spektikul, only with this bar you flipped it and focused on me no longer writing for him.
VS.
We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
This was a decent feed. The wording could be better but this was nice, basically flipping the subject back on him and getting at him for trying the same shit Red Bull tried.
'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
The wording and structure of this punch wasn't all that great. The punch itself though was decent enough. It had an alright flow and the concept was a fresh nameplay. You get extra points for producing a fresh nameplay on a guy who's name is pretty played now.
Overall, this battle wasn't all too great. I think that Te Ora let himself down by focusing on the same concept for both of his bars. I thought the second one was better because it was a decent feed and a better flip. Still though, speculating on me ghosting for Spektikul made the punch lose power because I never actually stated who I ghosted for in this so any punch would be speculation. Spektikul seriously needs to work on his fucking wording and structuring of his punches because the unnecessary ............... is getting annoying. His punches were decent, the first being a nice feed and flip of a punch and the second being a fresh nameplay. I'm not a fan of explanations myself, but I feel that it was necessary for the punch so I'll allow it. I mean, don't even try and say that everyone knows where Orania is and what its currency is, let alone the fact that it isn't sanctioned. LMFAO!!
VOTE: SPEKTIKUL
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