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Old 12-29-06, 05:54 PM   #8
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2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row

Vs

Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
waited awhile, parents wouldnt loan time
But I Didnt Care. . .
Cuz i doubted he`d come fresh, Or even write his own lines

V/final i felt he took it with those lines an his verse was more consistent wit less played shit i like the own line..black you had that one line that i thought was good but you feel off in ya verse, the last bar coulda been dope if you worded it right
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