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Old 12-29-06, 07:08 PM   #7
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Scouting your next move.........I'll counter attack to wreck fools
and leave Perfect Plexed in a position Curt Hennig would pay respect too
Once again you had a nice use of multies for a decent flow and the concept was tight. I thought the nameplay was fresh which is a plus considering most nameplays are played on him by now. As a wrestling fan I fully understood the punch and it had a nice bit of wording and came off strong.
You beat Glocks but that aint a trey pound you squeezing
Dog your 'semi' doesnt kill.........Its the round you leaving
Decent feed, and a decent flip off him beating Glocks last week. The semi wordplay was used different in picture's bar, but you flipped it around for something else and dropped another decent line.

VS.

its not hard blowin off ya lame punch.. but u still got me scared as fuck
cuz i can't even duck this battle when u hit me with gay names to look up
This wasn't really a decent feed. The punch was barely there and it comes off as more of a statement than a punch. It wasn't worded that well either, it was too simple and that only works if the punch is raw.
N.Tavarez didn't make the finals.. look, thats sum'n someone will have heard of G
cuz this semi's leavin ya face lookn worse than if truckers practiced plastic surgery
This was a decent flip using the semi final concept. It was worded nicely and came off strong. A lot better than your first bar because it flowed off the tongue nicely which makes it stronger.


Overall, this battle was alright. I thought that Nelson took it because he had two strong bars. Picture only had one bar, he had the opportunity to feed off Tav's bar but failed and dropped more of a statement punch. That is what this battle came down to. Two decent bars against one decent and one average bar.

VOTE: N.TAVAREZ

P.S. - Tav, you can now hit up my Fuck You All battle in the LBL cockhead. You can to picture, if you want. Word.
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