Listenin'...

quality is better...yeah I see you working on the delivery...flow is off tho packin' too much in here..presence is gettin better..less monotone here..lyrics are nice..

I like your hook idea jus was amateurly done and I don't like that bound 2 believe..n that thing..cuda been sumin hotter..

but this was real nice shit..1

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