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Old 12-30-06, 11:13 AM   #13
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nothin

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So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day

black has wordin problems. like serious wordin problems. grammatical wordin problems were sentences dont even make sense. "it was two other men were involved"...no. his verse had nothin notable. final came better. not by much tho. his quotable was clever n thats what got him this.

v/ final
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