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Old 12-30-06, 04:20 PM   #12
John Hensley.
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Pussy faggot, ur punches are always missin' dude
Ur like beer foam...all it takes is a few taps to get rid of you
I've tried helpin' u before, but yea now I'll be frank
Ur the baby carriage of text...
... u always go on long strolls down the ranks
U've accomplished NOTHING at RV so I'll make fun of this gay
U'd take the league by a storm, but the climate is sunny today
Dominates? When Kempo was moddin, I faced this cunt n' yo
I now owe him...
... he gave a PERFECT word to describe our match from a month ago

vs.



And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?
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Originally Posted by DatrusHurtz
We faced once before, and I emerged victorious.

What? ur mother must have moved, coz thats bullshit taking place
coz I emerged that day as well---> on her back, entities, and face
So now...U should die inside your ride, n rot where no one'll find samples
Coz this fag likes to climate guys daily, But its just routine for an asshole


damn lol, this was a pretty close battle. i've never read a concept flipping battle that i wasn't in, so i was really interested in peepin this one. DTH dropped some nice shit, i liked his wording with the concepts, the foam and carriage ones were worded well enough that they'd be good lines without them being hte focal point. climate was ok, worth quoting. the closer was nice, i used a similar idea as well as far as relating a word to something like that. Wordz, i thought you ahdt he best line of the battle with the Entities line, i laughed at that one. The run the league line was pretty nice too. The climate one was also only ok, but i thought it was good enough. Kind of a forced concept to me. Overall, real nice battle, and although Wordz had my fav. line i thought DTH was a bit more consistent. So i'm going with him.
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