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Old 12-30-06, 04:53 PM   #13
Appocolyptik
Beginning Your Ending
 
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Pussy faggot, ur punches are always missin' dude
Ur like beer foam...all it takes is a few taps to get rid of you
I've tried helpin' u before, but yea now I'll be frank
Ur the baby carriage of text...
... u always go on long strolls down the ranks
Vets ALWAYS merk u, but once the result was more alarming
Cuz u had a photo finish...
... when u took ur pics to Kodak for enlarging
I said I would implement new ideas, I made an elevation thread for fucks
Its been out with the old and in with the new...
... excuses for why you STILL suck
U've accomplished NOTHING at RV so I'll make fun of this gay
U'd take the league by a storm, but the climate is sunny today

vs

And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?
N' to tell the truth, I beet wimps every day till it hurtz
So with all bullshit aside...kindly find a place for ur verse
every day u get worst, n ur whole act is soft
Coz Datrus aint off the chain...
...not till they have scrapped em completely off the walls

Good battle guys, I thought Datrus came really tight and really worded his lines well and Wordz Aghod came pretty cool as well, one of the better verses I've seen from him in fact. The beer taps and kicking wack heads out lines were dope as fuck and were worded really well from both. In the edge Datrus took this with two more quotables but boh dropped nicely.

V/ Datrushurtz
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