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Old 12-31-06, 09:15 AM   #7
Enygma
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Not really feeling that sample in the beat too much. It's a little too repetetive....lol. I like how you spoke over it in the second hook.....it broke up the repetetiveness of it. Anyway, I like the rhyme scheme you tried to put together in the first verse, but it took away from the flow some. Usually your flow is what stands out and it did in this song too, but for the wrong reasons. Second and third verses came back with much better flow......and LMAO @ being bored with third verses.....ROFL!!!!!!!!


I don't think many people will laugh at that, but at least I know I'm getting into that hard to crack noggin of yours
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