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Old 01-02-07, 05:56 PM   #13
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Te Ora

ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
-----This was really nice.

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
----Seeing as it's only two punches, using the same concept was iffy. Still, really nicely executed.

vs.

Spektikul

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
-----Half-decent... still not much fire to it.

'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
-----In-tents/intense is horribly played. Overall, this was poorly worded and just doesn't hit.

I think Te Ora got this fairly easily.

Vote: Te Ora
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