Stanza

Rap Is like Models Full of Skilled dimes and voters are ready to jus smash it
and your skills could be the doorknob of models..and niggas still wont grab it
^^Huge stretch. His skills could be doorknobs of models? That just doesn't work. Too abstract.

Man your verse so wack niggas close they eyes when they scroll pass it
Your skill Is jus Garbage in Disquise.....And nobody wants to Unmask shit
^^Better than the opener... but i'm just not feeling it. Nothing hardhitting,

and everybody know Yo Girl Is like a Police officer Jus flashin nigga's for the money
Tef likes to holla at the ladies....bcuz seeing them close their ears looks funny
^^Horrible wording... i get it but the wording made it take a sec.

5-6?....Oh I see Thats Your age I Thought It was your battle rec
Im the ace of the Card Game nigga...This joker gets Laughed out the deck
^^Okay, but no real connection. Not bad, though. Set-up seemed like it would take it in a different direction but it was decent.

Nigga You jus Hatin bcuz Rapverse knows the Stanza's the realest Don
I could Pick at you being mute
.....But thats what voters do to their Speaker when yo audio is turned on
^^Wording is killing you... "pick at you being mute" is just plain bad. You had a nice concept but the wording fucked it over.


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TEF



He should quit textin and do sports so he won’t look all steamed
Cause he represent the WAC better than the Boise state football team
^^If you tied this in to Stanza it would be a lot better. Right now it's just okay.

His record here is respectless, he rhymes bitter and recklace
If losing's a state of mind…Stanza’s brain is probably bigger than texas
^^This was played, seen this a good amount of times. With that said, your wording's improved.

I seen the ball drop for the new year but Stanza? He’s~fagging
He waited for balls to drop too…This homo gets excited for T-Baggin…
^^WHAT!?!?!?!? DO NOT DO THAT ~ CRAP. That's fucking wack in itself. Aside from that, the punch is weak.

…And he’s having, A history of bad names? he’s~on~par
To Influenza Stanza name, he thought of Old ass Nissan cars
^^No... not liking. Weak wording with a noobish style and a weak punch.

I clicked your myspace bro, wack punches make you look like Kool Moe dee?
2 wack bars in the mag?..
You aint spitin crack you do it, we hopin you’ll O.D
^^Terrible set-up but decent, yet played closer.


I think TEF gets this, although that "~" nearly had me going with Stanza. Overall, he just came with harder punches.

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TEF