This Whole Game is Gettiin Lame So Fuck all Of Your Wack Usernames
Couldnt Drop Dope If I Shove Crack Up His Back and into His Brain
There's no way to reword this concept to make it good, the whole drop dope thing is played. Anything dope/crack is played. Think of it this way man, if the concept comes obvious to you, its prolly been done before
Im Wreckin His aim.....And Its Only The Begining of Shame
But The Middle of this Dame So Nigga's Know im Smokin This Jane
the punchline here is essentially, "I'm smokin' this jane". If someone said that to you, would you be offended? No, its just a statement, there isn't a diss in this
Shoot up His Spain So The Bitch Wont Scream Livin Levita Loca
All You'll Here is Livin....Bcuz The Rest of His Levita Gets Broke Up
now this concept was actually okay, haven't seen anything exactly like it before. But ur punchline makes no sense "Bcuz the rest of his levita gets broke up?" what does that mean? U coulda made the punchline more like

people need to stop bitchin, cuz to be u, their wishin
u've got that levita loca thing goin' for u...
...its just a shame ur barely livin

That's a quick rewording, could be much better, but thats the idea, make it into a diss instead of a statement
I Dont choke Up But word is you suck Cock & That Virus Hittin Ya Spots
Umm....I would Diss You But Thats The Only Reason You Cum Hot
same as the first bar.. cum lines are played, nothing u can do to make them good
So Ill Leave Yo Dumb Spots open For Early Recovery So You can Compete
Im Not Talkn Bout You fuckin Ya dad when I Was Talkin Bout Cum-Pete
blahhhhh, same as above
Ill Shot you With a Hi-C And Watch Yo Notes Drop To A Low Octave Of B
You A Dumb G....Must Explain Why The H I J In Yo Alphabets is H I V
this hardly makes sense.. i woulda made it more like
Fuckin' infected faggot, u ain't respected highly
U must drink a lotta Orange Juice...
... u gotta a HI-C that goes nice with ur HIV
Bitches Claim You Hot and I see You Get Landed in The Top Ten
But Ya Skills Is Like Soda in a Can..Neva Really Spose To Top Tin
I see what u were goin' for, but this is a bit of a stretch with the top tin thing.. if u gotta change the way somethin is said for it to be good, don't use it
You Cant See Me Must Explain Why Ya Punchez Are Mishits To Me
Bcuz Like A Clock I Hit With 2 45'z Like Its A Quater To Three
Don't use self-glory, its a pretty common rule.. if the bar is about you and not him, don't use it
Possibly Niggas Already Sponserin Me...So Votes Are A Ease
Ya Punchez Never Climax Like Whores They only a Tease
This idea is a bit played, but it coulda been okay.. maybe something more like this

Ur at the top of ur game n' ur gonna go really far
Ur punches always hit a climax...
.. everyone can see how small they really are

Something like that with the whole limp/small idea.. anywaymake it into a punch, urs dissed whores more than him, lol
Get Off Ya Knees Nigga's Stop Begging For Ya Punch To Hit
Waitin on Me To Sneeze So You Can Hopefully Touch my Spitz
played, same as the other played stuff
I Would Keep Goin but The First Blow Really Ending This Game
Yo Bitch Is Hot Like You...Must Explain Why Noone Wants To Us her name
really doesn't make sense and pretty weak

Your problem is that first off, your concepts for the most part are played and not original. You did have a few okay ideas though u could work with. Also, u don't seem to develop your concepts into punches, more into statements. Read the punchlines and make sure they are actually mean and dissing. Keep working on it man.