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Old 01-04-07, 07:34 PM   #6
GREVISS
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FAME

I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. .
....which proves they didn't read your battle last weeK
ight

No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!
not really a harsh diss

Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw
you made the Top Punches...
even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all
not really a harsh diss

Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit
but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list!
ok i see what your tryin to do now, take his punches away from
him, ill consider that in my final vote


Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
not feelin it

Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg?
her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. .
....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers!
lil humour

You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
ight

This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude
Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
not feelin it, should really close with one of the better bars of your verse

VITT

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
ight lil humour

If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
ight

Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
ehh

Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
end rhyme

Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
ehh

Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
ehh w/play

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
ehh

Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
lol

Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
ehh

I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
ehh

I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you
not feeling it

well id have to give this to fame, although i think vit had the best bar,
he dropped 22 lines to fames 16, when fame dropped first, which is
fucked as i think if Vitt had of took some of the bars out he prolly
could of took this, but as it stands fame would have to take this for
better consistancy, and i cant really make a choice on which bars
to take outta Vitts verse to make it fair,

V/Fame
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