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Old 01-04-07, 07:41 PM   #7
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Faime S. Quotez

I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. .
....which proves they didn't read your battle last week!
^^Shitty wording. The punch is kind of weak, too.

No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!
^^Blah, plain.

Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw
you made the Top Punches...
even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all
^^Okay... still not very hard hitting.

Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit
but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list!
^^Bad.

Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
^^Lame.

Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg?
her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. .
....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers!
^^Okay.

You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
^^Could have hit a lot harder, good concept - poor delivery.

This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude
Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
^^Wack.






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Vitticus

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
^^Predictable nameplay, decent delivery.

If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
^^This could have been flipped SO much better. Really watered down.

Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
^^Lame.

Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
^^Lame.

Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
^^Blah.

Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
^^I liked the concept, not the execution.

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
^^You should have tried dissing yourself in the set-up... or something - just to tie it in. Pretty gay.

Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
^^I'm digging the hell outta hte concept, but the delivery is shitty.

Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
^^True, but not hitting.

I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
^^What? No....

I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you
^^Gay.






This battle was reallly weak. However, I think Vitticus barely edged it out due to his concepts. Both had reallllly bad execution that took away from the impact of the punches.

Vote:
Vitticus






oh yeah:

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- If your opponent posts first, then you must post the same amounts of lines or less. You cannot post more lines than your opponent if they post first.

so you might get dqed :/
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