View Single Post
Old 01-05-07, 04:30 AM   #6
GREVISS
Flyweight
 
Posts: 112
IP:

Apex
See I know you send jabs and hooks, but you miss piles,
Sure I'll bob and weave, since that’s the only thing that Chris Stylez,
a knitting punch lol

You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
ight,just

Fat queer, not league material, but don’t get pissed cuz,
I hurt you but don’t leave now…
When I left ya leg tournament to break that shit off,
not feelin the w/play

From Georgia? Bitch if your hood then the map failed,
After peeps read mah verse, they realize your already AT L,
ight

So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
not feelin it, yes i do get it, best out ,suck in

Your queer man, and your not smart, & your face? I bend all,
Don’t think you have a great mind just because you like your mental,
dont like that bend all

S’fucked how gay you are man, you be all up in mens’ grills dude,
In this world, it’s all about the benjamins…
Yet you went a step further & dated Bills too,
nice

See truly I hate you, that’s why against me you’ll hit the floor fast,
See you got off on the wrong foot, my other one’s still up your ass,
ight
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Semper_fidelis

Awwww, that’s cute kid, Always Faithful couldn’t be more nice,
See your faithful to your friends…
Which explains why your right hand serves the most purpose in your life,
ight

stylez
Cares less if ya back to text, just get off da apex of my bone
Either you were banned or just have a bad alias...if not
This the underfunded version of the Attack of the clones
cares less?? not feelin the bar as well

Dont think cuz u rhyme u can start shinning with me
Only reason you shine when you rhyme is cuz u shining with teeth
repetitive

And that yellow is blinding to me,So stop tryna piss in my zone
Is kinda sad that ya urine n ya teeth coincide witcha skin tone
this doesnt work at all, only cos youd have to be rascist to even
find this remotely funny,not sayin you are, just doesnt work for me


Stop worrying about me brushing up on my skills
When you need to start brushing up on ya grill
simple

But anyways......
I guess you really wanna see some tight lines in sixteens
No worry i'll make the fit,i'll just post a pic of the tight linen of ya jeans
not feelin it

Lets switch the scene with time in a crunch.
We can do this punch for punch...or eye for eye and be blind in this race
I pick option two, cuz it better than having to see your ugly face
not feelin it

I swear...your worst then ugly broads on them matchmaker communities
These false personals I got emunity
But i do give you a thumbs up, for bringin something new to me
hmmm

Apex got this to me, just more consistant his bars had less filler,
meaning the set up lines matched the punchlines better, also the
bar of the match for me was the dated bills one,

stylez, im not the best, but you need to work on making your
bars more cohesive and wity, or at least put a nasty streak
in your lines, no hate but you should put this in the elevation
feedback thread, im sure it will help you to work your craft a
lil better...

V/Apex
  Reply With Quote