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Old 01-05-07, 04:49 AM   #9
King Solo
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5-6?....Oh I see Thats Your age I Thought It was your battle rec
Im the ace of the Card Game nigga...This joker gets Laughed out the deck
Nigga You jus Hatin bcuz Rapverse knows the Stanza's the realest Don
I could Pick at you being mute
.....But thats what voters do to their Speaker when yo audio is turned on

VS.

He should quit textin and do sports so he won’t look all steamed
Cause he represent the WAC better than the Boise state football team
His record here is respectless, he rhymes bitter and recklace
If losing's a state of mind…Stanza’s brain is probably bigger than texas


This battle wasn't all that impressive. Stanza, you seem to be stuck in a place where you have nice concepts but really crappy wording. TEF has improved though, his concepts are still there and now he is improving his wording in places. Although you do need to drop any symbols you decide to put in the verse unless they are necessary for the punch because they look gay otherwise. Anyway, your verse overall was better and your quotables were stronger than Stanza's.

V/ - TEF
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