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Old 01-05-07, 05:02 AM   #8
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No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!

VS.

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"



This battle was really poor, and I only quoted bars based from the quality of this battle. Faime tends to focus on the same concept in his verses all the time and half his shit comes out like a statement. You need to be using a fresh concept for each bar not using one concept for half a verse and then another to finish the shit off. And Vitt, man... you really need to work on your wording because right now it just ain't working. I'm finding it difficult to find the flow of your verse and whilst it is TEXT... you should at least have some sort of flow going.. try using some multies in there. Right now it just seems like your verse is a long run on paragraph.

Anyway, Vitt was better and he won.

V/ - Vitticus
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